Poetry Poem - Song Lyrics - Feeling Great

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By leni sands

Source: Google Pictures
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I'm feeling great

Just feeling fine

I've got an awful lot of love

to give to mine

And when your near

just gotta hold you

It'll always be

just how I told you

The sun will always shine

even when the rain decides to fall

as long as you are mine

I'll be there

when you call


The apple tree will blossom

and instead of being on earth

we'll be high upon the moon

for all our love is worth

We've had happy days

always in the past

we've got lots more to

look forward to ahead

And when you're near

just gotta hold you

it'll always be

just how I told you


The sea will keep on

rushing to the shore

and grass will be greener

and grow much more

The waterfalls will shower

down upon our love

the stars will always

light our way above

Are you feeling great

are you feeling fine

I love you more and more

now that you are mine

and when you're near

Just gotta hold you

It'll always be just how

I told you

The sun will always shine

even when the rain decides to fall

as long as you are mine

I'll be there

when you call


copyright © leni sands 2010

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kennynext Level 2 Commenter 20 months ago

Very very good. And as the picture shows, you can dance in the rain.

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leni sands Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks for stopping by.

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saleheensblog 20 months ago

how couldn't she feel great? she certainly is feeling great and you can dance together. nice one and voted up.

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leni sands Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks again.

ralwus 20 months ago

even the cliche moon worked in this.

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leni sands Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks, I like cliche!

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Kavita Trivedi 20 months ago

When I finished reading this I couldn't stop smiling.

Beautifully descriptive :)

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leni sands Hub Author 20 months ago

Thank you

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sofs Level 7 Commenter 19 months ago

So beautiful, these lines leave my a certain feeling in the pit of my stomach..

I love you more and more

now that you are mine

and when you're near

Just gotta hold you

It'll always be just how

I told you

The sun will always shine

even when the rain decides to fall

as long as you are mine

I'll be there

when you call

may be we echo each other..I love it!!

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richtwf 19 months ago

Great poem, beautifully written and a pleasure to read. Cheers Leni for sharing this with us.

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leni sands Hub Author 19 months ago

Thank you richtwf

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epigramman 19 months ago

..so appropriate you chose Gene Kelly from that scene in Singing in the Rain .... 'cos I feel so great reading this .... and dancing too!!!

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leni sands Hub Author 19 months ago

it is lovely to dance with you epigramman, dancing in the rain!

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 18 months ago

What a wonderful feeling to be holding the one you love. This poem is beautiful and I so loved the very apt picture. Voted up.

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leni sands Hub Author 18 months ago

Thank you acaetnna

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Ashantina Level 1 Commenter 17 months ago

Just started smiling when I was reading this. aahhh :)

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leni sands Hub Author 17 months ago

It's the picture that makes me smile - I've written, re-written and read the poem that often that I know it by heart, but every time I look at the picture I spot something else that makes me smile...thanks for dropping by Ashantina I am pleased it made you smile!

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ladyjojo 16 months ago

Very lovely.

Keep up the good work.

God bless you :)

haneen 15 months ago

that is so nice!!!!!

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leni sands Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you ladyjojo and haneen your comments are much appreciated.

Alyssa 2 months ago

I love your poem i got this special feeling

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leni sands Hub Author 2 months ago

Alyssa - thanks for your comment - having that special feeling is great!

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