Poetry Poem - Song lyrics - Love Ticket

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By leni sands

Source: google pics

Here's a little song I wrote some years ago....


I just bought a ticket to Saturn

Where I will play among the stars

Then I’m gonna walk on Jupiter

And maybe do a dance on Mars

I’m gonna take a space boat to Venus

Then I think I’ll hop on the Moon

And it’s all because you said you love me

Someday soon

We’re gonna build our little cocoon

Then we’ll fly off to Hawaii

We’ll row a canoe to Bali hai

We’ll climb that big Rocky Mountain

And show the natives how to fly

I’m on cloud nine

And everything is going just fine

Remember…

I just bought a ticket to Saturn

Then I played games with the stars

I took a little walk on Jupiter

And danced a little jig on Mars

I took you in the space boat to Venue

We both hopped on to the moon

And it’s all because you said you love me

Someday soon

We’re gonna build our little cocoon

Our children will be born on Mercury

Their playroom will be in the stars

Our home will be on Orion

Their laughter will take them to Mars

They’ll find true love in a spaceboat

Travel to venus and the moon

And someday soon

They’ll build their own little cocoon

And have children of their own

Because…

We just bought a ticket to Saturn

We just told the preacher we do

We’re flying off to Pluto

And I love you

I’m on cloud nine

And my whole world is really just fine

And it’s all because you said you love

Love ticket

Love ticket

Comments

Poohgranma profile image

Poohgranma Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

How wonderful! I remember when "I love you" said by that special guy had my head in the stratosphere. This could have been a hit leni - maybe it still could be!

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thehemu 13 months ago

its like joyful ride! love ticket love ticket! thanks leni for sharing such joyful song.

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Leptirela Level 2 Commenter 13 months ago

hahaha I absolutely love it. And right now I could do with a ticket to saturn :)

Thank you for sharing , well written :)

great hub, Vote up

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leni sands Hub Author 13 months ago

Thanks guys, can't understand why the rating on this has dropped to 48...

Poohgranma - could've been, might'av been - oh if only I had had the confidence to send it where-ever it should've been sent to make it a hit...maybe someday, someone somewhere will see this hub and think - yeah I want that song - I can dream I suppose!

thehemu - enjoy the ride

Leptirela - couldn't we all do with that ticket? Thanks for the comment.

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chisom emmanuel 13 months ago

i like you song

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leni sands Hub Author 13 months ago

Thank you chisom emmanuel. Nice of your to comment.

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Silent hurricane Level 1 Commenter 4 months ago

I love this song, thank you for sharing.

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leni sands Hub Author 4 months ago

Thanks for your appreciation and welcome to hubpages Silent hurricane - I love the name! I will pop across and check out your hubs...

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Silent hurricane Level 1 Commenter 4 months ago

Thank you. My name was carefully chosen. :P

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