Poetry Poem - The Olympic Games

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By leni sands

A quickie....

Spotted a competition about writing something to do with the Olympic Games where the winning words would be displayed permanently on the wall outside the stadium. I'm not entering my poem but thought I would write something anyway.

This is what I came up with.

The Olympic Games

The Games of Life

Not about trouble

Not about strife

It’s not the winning,

It’s the taking part,

It’s all about

What’s true to heart

It’s not the loosing,

It’s all nations uniting

It’s not about war

but peace inviting

Not about trouble

Not about strife

Just the Olympics

The Games of life


All comments appreciated...

Copyright © Leni Sands 2010

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Poohgranma Level 6 Commenter 17 months ago

How very lovely!

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richtwf 17 months ago

So very true and wonderful thoughts indeed. Just reading the timing of the first comment on your hub from the time I am writing. It is 88 and it reminds me of a few Olympic things! There are four rings and take the oo from Poohgranma and you have five rings of the Olympics! The last Olympics was held in China on August 2008 - The eighth month of the 8th year of the new millennium - 8 being an auspicious number! Anyway a few trivial facts!

Cheers for sharing this hub and God bless and Merry Christmas to you!

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leni sands Hub Author 17 months ago

Wow richtwf - thats amazing - and a Merry Christmas to you too...

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richtwf 17 months ago

Sorry I can't count! I mean take one o from Poohgranma and you get five rings! lol

If you took the oo from her name you'd get three 8's ... 8th day of 8th month of 8th year of the new millennium - The start of the last China Olympics! Coincidences eh - Spooky!

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GusTheRedneck Level 6 Commenter 17 months ago

Hi Helena - Sorta reminds me of that common expression that even I, a non-athlete, have used quite often - "You can't win at this game for losing." The poem, however, "won for winning." Thanks for writing it.

Gus :-)))

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leni sands Hub Author 15 months ago

Thanks GusTheRedneck, sorry it took a while to respond but I am currently editing a crime novel for a friend...love your comment much appreciated.

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GmaGoldie Level 7 Commenter 15 months ago

leni sands,

Beautiful! Oh, the games and struggles of life - so very true. Thank you!

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leni sands Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you GmaGoldie and welcome aboard.

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Shamsud 2 months ago

fantastic write...thanks for sharing

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leni sands Hub Author 2 months ago

Thank you Shamsud, glad you enjoyed it.

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